It says ''Chance to win XBOX ONE in issue'' possibly change the grammar used? Magazine picture is good and the information used on the magazine is wanted by Tech fans (early Ghost information). The 'i' on the Title is abit out of place move it with the arrows so that you can get it perfect. I give it a 4/5.
It says ''Chance to win XBOX ONE in issue'' possibly change the grammar used?
ReplyDeleteMagazine picture is good and the information used on the magazine is wanted by Tech fans (early Ghost information). The 'i' on the Title is abit out of place move it with the arrows so that you can get it perfect. I give it a 4/5.
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